Miss You
Memories of you invade my night.
I smile and sob as I reminisce the past.
Stars across the sky I use to write,
Stories of us, so forever they last.
You and I, the tale starts.
Of our love, grief and joy there are parts.
Undo I wish to do of your death to give hope to lovers’ hearts.
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This is my entry for One Single Impression: Prompt 172 – Miss.
Awesome! Brilliant use of punctuations. I am not sure about immortality in human form but your poems prove that it can certainly be achieved through words. great poems! keep it up.
Another beautiful acrostic! The longing is very well expressed.
Nicely expressed T!!
Every single post, beautifully written.. But why are all of them sad?
U write so well!
Amazing words T. And the last line so touches the heart.
I loved the stars bit a lot
I loved ths one! Evokes so many emotions…great acrostic T!
Simply beautiful…something about melancholy strikes a chord with me.
This was mine:
http://mypoetcharm.blogspot.com/2011/04/fire-of-thirst.html
touching lines!
You need to write more happy stuff
