What have you done to me!

Like the sun ends the darkness of night,
You lead me into a world of bright light.

Like a river gushing down from a mountain top,
Your thoughts flow in my mind non-stop.

Like a rainbow makes every eye stare in wonder,
Your colorful personality makes my heart grow fonder.

Like the enduring shade under a tree,
Your endless support has set my soul free.

Like the cloud bursting into droplets of rain,
Your absence causes me to weep in pain.

Like all the newborns who know no harm,
Your innocence is what does all the charm.

Like the unique smell of rose, oh so sweet,
You are the only one that can sweep me off my feet.

Like a leaf that glides with a moving stream,
You make me float in the beauty of our silent dream.


What have you done to me, my dear? Without you around, my mind and my heart are never in harmony! You are my dream, you are my love!


  1. #1 by Anonymous on August 20, 2008 - 10:03 pm

    AWESOME! MIND-BLOWING! Can’t stop reading it over and over. Do creations like these make the pain tolerable? If pain can give birth to such gems, is such a pain desirable?


  2. #2 by Titaxy on August 20, 2008 - 10:54 pm

    @anonymous… Thanks!


  3. #3 by invincible on August 21, 2008 - 3:17 am

    nice poem… :))


  4. #4 by Titaxy on August 21, 2008 - 11:32 am



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