Heart torn apart…

You tell me where to start
as we walk along the shore.
How do I stay apart
from you, my beautiful soul.
It hurts my heart
at it’s core –
Knowing we have to part,
Seeing you walk out of the door.
Why do you have to depart
and leave my spirit so sore?
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  1. #1 by BG on March 10, 2009 - 1:00 pm

    nice 🙂

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  2. #2 by Titaxy on March 10, 2009 - 3:16 pm

    Thanks.

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  3. #3 by Carpe Diem on March 12, 2009 - 6:42 pm

    good one 🙂

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  4. #4 by Titaxy on March 12, 2009 - 7:14 pm

    thank you

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  5. #5 by Pixie on March 31, 2009 - 8:02 am

    Nice poem… 🙂
    I can’t write poetry at all and I really admire folks who do…

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  6. #6 by Titaxy on March 31, 2009 - 2:52 pm

    Thank you !!!!!!!

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  7. #7 by lafemmereva on April 9, 2009 - 3:59 am

    so that the distance will make the hearts grow fonder!

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  8. #8 by Titaxy on April 9, 2009 - 4:05 pm

    Yupe, it sure does. 🙂

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  9. #9 by Varsh on April 1, 2010 - 2:25 am

    Nice 🙂

    thank you!

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