Rain to my soul

Refreshing spring rain
evokes a flower’s beauty;
your charm sparks my spirit.

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  1. #1 by Mahmud faisal on December 16, 2009 - 12:04 am

    First I believe πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€
    after many many days! πŸ™‚

    yes yes…welcome back to being first πŸ˜€

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  2. #2 by Psych Babbler on December 16, 2009 - 1:00 am

    Nice haiku! πŸ™‚

    And missed the first spot! 😦

    thank you dear! πŸ™‚

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  3. #3 by viswajithkn on December 16, 2009 - 1:01 am

    and whose spark is it? πŸ˜›

    changes from time to time πŸ˜›

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    • #4 by viswajithkn on December 16, 2009 - 12:20 pm

      interesting!

      i know! πŸ˜€

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      • #5 by viswajithkn on December 16, 2009 - 12:27 pm

        at least someone has clarity in their thoughts… πŸ˜›

        ❓ i don’t know what that means ❓

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      • #6 by viswajithkn on December 16, 2009 - 12:46 pm

        it meant nothing…chill..!

        how can it not mean anything πŸ˜› ?

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      • #7 by viswajithkn on December 16, 2009 - 2:06 pm

        shabaa..theriyaama sollitaen…i totally forgot endha context la sonaen nu…hows your week been?

        ok fine :D…week’s been ok…not too busy πŸ™‚

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  4. #8 by Swaram on December 16, 2009 - 1:16 am

    Wow!

    πŸ™‚

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  5. #9 by Desi Ninja on December 16, 2009 - 2:41 am

    oh! missed it…
    but i’m gonna keep trying πŸ˜‰

    πŸ™‚

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  6. #10 by Matt on December 16, 2009 - 3:11 am

    A good one!
    I’m still on my bed,and this is a very nice haiku to wake up to! πŸ˜€

    aww, thanks Matt..

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  7. #11 by Nu on December 16, 2009 - 3:18 am

    wow..evokes a flowers beauty ! what a thought πŸ™‚

    πŸ™‚ thanks Nu

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  8. #12 by divz on December 16, 2009 - 5:54 am

    πŸ˜€ nice πŸ˜€

    πŸ˜€ thanks

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  9. #13 by Pesto Sauce on December 16, 2009 - 9:56 am

    We all need some charm and some magic

    we sure do πŸ˜€

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  10. #14 by justaroundme on December 16, 2009 - 10:10 am

    very nice haiku ….honestly as its winter right now,not able to romanticize “rain” though!

    yea true πŸ˜€

    thanks!

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  11. #15 by SiD on December 16, 2009 - 12:45 pm

    Nice one… πŸ˜€

    thank you!

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  12. #16 by comfortablynam on December 16, 2009 - 12:50 pm

    Nice.. πŸ™‚
    It’s raining outside..no flowers to be found though..I guess that’s why you wrote ‘Spring Rain’..

    that’s nice..it’s so cold out here..no rain no snow

    thank you dear!!

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  13. #17 by Pixie on December 17, 2009 - 12:00 am

    πŸ˜€
    Whose charm sparks your spirit?
    Why only a flower? even leaves have some sort of beauty with freshly fallen rain!! πŸ˜‰

    bhagoooooo

    lol…it changes from time to time πŸ˜› so can’t really give a proper ans yet πŸ˜€

    and yes, everything the rain touches, it makes it more beautiful πŸ˜€

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  14. #18 by BlueMist on December 17, 2009 - 5:42 am

    Spring is way far and I am already craving for it. πŸ˜›
    For now trying to find some sparks with this chilled winter. 😐
    Lovely Haiku πŸ™‚

    thanks, BM.. πŸ˜€

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  15. #19 by chotusworld on December 17, 2009 - 6:41 pm

    naice…. i wish i can say that about the rains here though 😦

    πŸ™‚ thanks…

    what’s different about the rain there?

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  16. #20 by noname on December 18, 2009 - 12:33 am

    Very good! Loved the contradiction of rain and spark. Also the analogy of beauty and spirit! It very aptly backs up the idea that true beauty is the beauty of soul / spirit. Great piece! Please let me know what all am I missing in the interpretation. Keep up the good work.

    πŸ™‚ it gives me a great pleasure to read your comment πŸ™‚ …you haven’t missed anything, rather you’ve told me things that I didn’t pay much attention to while i wrote it :-)…so thank you!!!

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