Mirage of oasis
boosts the dying hope of survival –
dreams of fine future.
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#1 by Matt Parker on February 1, 2010 - 9:39 pm
Nice! 😀 😀
😀 Thanks 😀
#2 by Matt Parker on February 1, 2010 - 9:41 pm
Y’know these are very good lines…I like it …the whole essence of a mirage 🙂
Now waiting for “noname” to decipher the hidden true meaning 😀 😀
🙂 thanks… and yea, I’m sure ‘noname’ will have a mind blowing explanation 😀
#3 by slpmartin on February 1, 2010 - 10:47 pm
How three lines can bring forth a flood of memories of dreams gone awry is amazing to me…thanks.
🙂 Thank you! and Welcome!!! 🙂
#4 by SiD on February 1, 2010 - 11:08 pm
i did not understand…o_O
no problem 😀
#5 by comfortablynam on February 2, 2010 - 12:19 am
Hope is forever..never left behind till..well till we are no more..
Very well written T.
#6 by Nu on February 2, 2010 - 12:22 am
Good one 🙂 and very deep 🙂
thank you, Nu
#7 by Swaram on February 2, 2010 - 12:42 am
Hw true 🙂
#8 by Psych Babbler on February 2, 2010 - 2:58 am
Lovely lines…loved how a mirage is the dream and represents hope….can so see that! 🙂
thanks, psych 🙂
#9 by Dew on February 2, 2010 - 8:02 am
Ahh!! Quite inspiring and thoughtful!!
thanks, Dew 🙂
#10 by celestialrays on February 2, 2010 - 8:52 am
oasis…hope…lovely thoughts 🙂
#11 by Varsh on February 2, 2010 - 9:12 am
Wow… you proved that its not the amount of words that make sense…its the choice of words and the meaning they hold…
thank you 🙂
#12 by BlueMist on February 2, 2010 - 9:38 am
Hummm….never looked at mirages with this perspective; for me they always signified something unachievable. Thanks for this new view T.
they are unachievable, but then they do help keep the hope alive 🙂
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