Breath

Sea breeze at moonrise

heightens senses with each breath;

sweet tender first kiss.

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This is my entry for Haiku Bones Prompt – Breath.

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  1. #1 by Matt Parker on February 8, 2010 - 1:15 am

    Again Nice ! πŸ˜€

    Again, thank you :P!

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  2. #2 by Matt Parker on February 8, 2010 - 1:16 am

    btw nice logic ! makes good sense πŸ˜€

    πŸ˜† thanks πŸ˜€

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  3. #3 by Swaram on February 8, 2010 - 1:20 am

    Am I first πŸ˜›

    nop πŸ˜€

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  4. #4 by Swaram on February 8, 2010 - 1:20 am

    Awww πŸ™‚

    πŸ™‚

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  5. #5 by Varsh on February 8, 2010 - 2:10 am

    Wow…

    πŸ™‚

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  6. #6 by Nancy on February 8, 2010 - 4:02 am

    ooooh yes, ohhhhh yes πŸ˜€

    Wonderful!!!!

    πŸ˜€ Thanks πŸ˜€

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  7. #7 by Nazish Rahman on February 8, 2010 - 6:12 am

    nice…sea breeze at moon rise…lovely!!

    Thanks πŸ™‚

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  8. #8 by G on February 8, 2010 - 8:40 am

    I miss normal posts at M&M. Enuf poetry girl, let us read some prose now πŸ™‚

    πŸ˜€ Ok Madam πŸ˜€ will think of what to rant about :D…

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  9. #9 by BlueMist on February 8, 2010 - 9:39 am

    Ahem ahem.
    I can not help but smile. This reminded me D’s latest post. πŸ˜‰

    πŸ™‚

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  10. #10 by Dew on February 8, 2010 - 10:13 am

    Realllllllly nice πŸ™‚

    Thanks!

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  11. #11 by comfortablynam on February 8, 2010 - 11:55 am

    Sell this to the Hallmark..you will make a lot of money.. πŸ™‚ ..perfect for the season..

    only if they are ready to buy πŸ˜€ thanks Comfy

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    • #12 by comfortablynam on February 8, 2010 - 5:03 pm

      Oh they will buy it in a heartbeat..this haiku is far superior that their usual cheesy lines they have..
      Will appeal to their more…ahem..mature consumers πŸ˜€

      ok…all I have to do now is find a way to sell it to them πŸ˜› If anything at all happens, you get a share ok? πŸ˜‰ for suggesting the idea πŸ˜€

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  12. #13 by Solilo on February 8, 2010 - 12:47 pm

    Good one. A Valentine’s Day Haiku?

    didn’t write it with Valentine’s day in mind, just a coincidence πŸ™‚ thanks Solilo

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  13. #14 by celestialrays on February 8, 2010 - 3:11 pm

    Very sweet T, I could imagine myself there πŸ˜€

    πŸ˜€ Thanks CR πŸ˜€

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  14. #15 by Nids on February 8, 2010 - 6:07 pm

    Good one.. even though I don’t understand tha HAIKU stuff i still cud feel the love – I am reading a lot these days, to educate myslef on this.

    Love,
    Nids

    Thanks Nids πŸ™‚ many hugs!!!!!!

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  15. #16 by Shas on February 9, 2010 - 12:59 pm

    Nice one.

    thanks! πŸ™‚

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  16. #17 by Elegant Chic on February 9, 2010 - 1:36 pm

    Awww nice! πŸ™‚

    I need an apartment with a sea-view now now now!! 😦

    who doesn’t want one of those πŸ˜€

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  17. #18 by bini on February 9, 2010 - 6:55 pm

    You just took my breath away!

    πŸ™‚

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  18. #19 by Tumblewords on February 9, 2010 - 11:56 pm

    Sweet!

    Thanks!

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  19. #20 by Sandy on February 11, 2010 - 3:49 pm

    Nice, I love that first line,

    thank you πŸ™‚

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