Pregnant

Blue sky pregnant with black clouds,

darkness surrounds, ready to pour –

Eyes full of grief.

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This is my entry for Haiku Bones Prompt – Pregnant.

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  1. #1 by Varsh on March 14, 2010 - 11:23 am

    First!!!

    yes m’am 🙂

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  2. #2 by Varsh on March 14, 2010 - 11:24 am

    You have your way with words T…lovely! 🙂

    Thanks!

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  3. #3 by BlueMist on March 14, 2010 - 11:25 am

    Coincidence. Just did this prompt 🙂
    Lovely ! Sunshine is just about to follow ! 😀

    waiting hopefully for the sunshine 🙂

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  4. #4 by BlueMist on March 14, 2010 - 11:29 am

    A pic accompanied will make it perfect . have it ?

    I don’t think so :D…even if I did, I’m too lazy to dig for a pic 😛

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  5. #5 by Nu on March 14, 2010 - 11:47 am

    like always your post title raised curiosity..but now that I know this blog since long was sure of the prankster in you 🙂

    Nice Haiku !!

    If I’m pregnant, I’m not gonna give it away this easily in the title itself 😛

    Thanks, Nu 🙂

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    • #6 by Matt on August 20, 2012 - 5:25 pm

      Well I do remember seeing a post titled ” I got married” . So 😛

      😆

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  6. #7 by celestialrays on March 14, 2010 - 1:47 pm

    nice T 🙂

    thank you!

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  7. #8 by slpmartin on March 14, 2010 - 6:29 pm

    An excellent poem….kudos!

    thanks!

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  8. #9 by Stan Ski on March 14, 2010 - 7:07 pm

    They could be tears of joy…

    could be… 🙂

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  9. #10 by Mahmud faisal on March 14, 2010 - 9:09 pm

    a nice one again 😀

    thanks! how have you been? how did your exams go?

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  10. #11 by priyaiyer on March 14, 2010 - 10:58 pm

    lovely comparision!!!

    thanks!

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  11. #12 by Sunshinesafar on March 15, 2010 - 12:04 am

    Impactful!

    thanks!

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  12. #13 by Psych Babbler on March 15, 2010 - 3:52 am

    Wouldn’t you like to know what went through my mind when I read the title on my blogroll! 😛 I thought it would be some story like you had written a long time ago about telling your mum you were preggers. 😀 Nice haiku.

    😆 no more such stories, yet 😆 Thanks, Psych.

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  13. #14 by comfortablynam on March 15, 2010 - 12:59 pm

    That is such a misleading prompt..wonderful take on it T 🙂

    😆 Thanks, Comfy

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  14. #15 by Sandy on March 15, 2010 - 2:45 pm

    I like the last line. Hope you use that one again.

    Thanks!

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  15. #16 by Tumblewords on March 15, 2010 - 6:33 pm

    wow – nice!

    Thanks!

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  16. #17 by shilpadesh on March 16, 2010 - 9:44 am

    Oops for a second I thought you were pregnant and I was going to do a yay dance!

    😀 let’s do the yay dance just for fun 😛

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  17. #18 by Dew on March 16, 2010 - 11:16 am

    a beautiful simile 🙂

    smile for what? ❓

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  18. #19 by Cynthia on March 21, 2010 - 3:59 am

    A stunner.

    Thanks!

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  19. #20 by Matt on August 20, 2012 - 5:26 pm

    Didn’t I gift you a “haiku czar” badge a long time ago? 😀 😀 Do I need to say more?

    😀 thanks Matt

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