My room…

My room, my zone;
My kingdom, my throne.
I smile, I cry, I gloat, I moan.
Thank you, for those caring arms you always loan.

The familiar scents of different candles that works atone…
The loving embrace of the pillows that are my own…
The lively zest in the shelf that the books adorn…
The cuddly bear on the chair that lifts my frown…
The big closet that looks as if it was visited by a cyclone…
The vibrant walls with photos that remind me I’m never alone…
The whispers of wind through the windows that teaches me love’s tone…

Living in you, I’ve grown –
Learning the intriguing unknown,
And forgetting the unwanted known.
Thank you, I hope how much I love you, I’ve shown.

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For some reason, I have this overflowing love and appreciation for my room today. Thus this piece dedicated for the awesome room that it is :).

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  1. #1 by Prashanti on April 1, 2010 - 6:24 pm

    Loved this the best !!! Perfectly captures what one’s room means to them 🙂

    😀

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  2. #2 by comfortablynam on April 1, 2010 - 6:33 pm

    Awesome..Now you want me to go and clean up mine.. 🙂 which is never a good thing.. 😛

    not that mine is clean or whatsoever, Comfy…but there’s a comfort even in that somewhat untidy familiarity 🙂

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  3. #3 by Pixie on April 1, 2010 - 8:17 pm

    Oh yes.. I agree…

    I feel the same about both my rooms – here at home in Bangalore and my room at home in Mysore! 🙂

    Beautifully written T 🙂

    🙂 Thanks, Pix

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  4. #4 by Nu on April 1, 2010 - 8:28 pm

    how you manage to play with words like this T ? It’s lovely..intelligent and with a lovely touch of emotions 🙂

    Thanks so much, Nu. 🙂

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  5. #5 by chotusworld on April 1, 2010 - 8:53 pm

    my room, my den.. a place meant for us, that has a certain character to it even.. wants me to make a trip to my parent’s home just to relive my growing up years in my room..

    lovely word play T! straight from the heart..

    yupe my room too sure does have a certain character 🙂 thanks

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  6. #6 by slpmartin on April 1, 2010 - 9:18 pm

    An excellent and warm poem of a place of shelter…so nicely presented.

    🙂 Thanks

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  7. #7 by anthrdayinparadise on April 1, 2010 - 10:05 pm

    and..through the words your love shone..very very nice..

    😀 Thanks 😀

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  8. #8 by Varsh on April 1, 2010 - 11:39 pm

    Ohhh….reading this reminds me of my room 😦

    Our room is our most priced possession na! There was never a time when it wasn’t cluttered with clothes and with books strewn away everywhere, but the moment there was some foreign object detected my tantrums were inevitable! 😛

    it sure it, varsh…i sometimes even get too possessive about my room 😀

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  9. #9 by chatterbox on April 2, 2010 - 3:29 am

    Wow! beautiful words…loved getting a view of your room through this poem 😀 😀

    Keep up the good work 🙂

    Cheers!!

    😀 thanks CB

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  10. #10 by Dev on April 2, 2010 - 3:55 am

    Your room will be proud of you today. 😉

    😀 I hope 😀

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  11. #11 by Makk on April 2, 2010 - 7:12 am

    Lovely Composition of feelings.

    Keep smiling.

    🙂 Thanks Makk

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  12. #12 by celestialrays on April 2, 2010 - 7:50 am

    now now now, how many rooms get a poem dedicated to them eh? 😀
    Print this out and stick it on your door 🙂

    😆 will do m’am 😀

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  13. #13 by mahmud faisal on April 2, 2010 - 8:43 pm

    well…. writing about room with so much love? ahemm… recite this one in your room, and you will see your room is smiling in happiness 😉

    Nice words TT, take care! 🙂

    🙂 Thanks, Mahmud.

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  14. #14 by How do we know on April 3, 2010 - 7:38 am

    rooms are sooo underrated in the peace that they provide!

    🙂 welcome!

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  15. #15 by Reema on April 4, 2010 - 8:44 am

    everyone loves their room 🙂

    i’m sure they do !

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  16. #16 by justaroundme on April 5, 2010 - 2:48 pm

    The vibrant walls with photos that remind me I’m never alone…

    I loved this line very much.

    🙂 Thanks

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  17. #17 by Psych Babbler on April 6, 2010 - 3:34 am

    Loved this poem…I feel like I’m in your room 🙂 Great description…

    😀 Thanks!

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  18. #18 by Matt on August 20, 2012 - 6:40 pm

    Lol @ Cyclone 😀 Your posts make me “smile” and when you rhyme, it makes my time reading it worth”while” 😀

    See what I did there? 😛

    Lame attempt but still …..

    nicely done 🙂

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