His  –


stole hearts with

every warm glimpse.

Smile, so luminous

made even the darkest of

nights seem full of light and life.

Touch, so soothing and powerful

drove bad omens away, far off sight.

Grace, showed all a simple way of life.

He – the beloved of all, worshiped her deeply

in his own erratic ways; for she was –

the key to uncovering his strengths;

the rationale of his life’s path;

the wisdom behind his words;

the lullaby to his soul.

The eternal love

that made him

Him was



This is my entry for 3WW CCXLIIIerratic, luminous, omen.



  1. #1 by celestialrays on June 2, 2011 - 1:28 pm

    I loved loved loved loved loved loved the style! 😀
    Does it have a name?

    Oh and the story you spun with those words was far from the norm 🙂
    Loved it!

    Etheree…starting with a syllable in the first line and writing 10 lines, by adding a syllable to each line.

    thank you, dear!


  2. #2 by Altonian on June 2, 2011 - 1:32 pm

    Very cleverly formed, and with nice sentiments.

    thank you!


  3. #3 by Comfy on June 2, 2011 - 1:41 pm

    Woah! The whole this is amazing T. The words (of course) but the presentation as well adds so much to the impact of this one. Awesome!

    thank you!


  4. #4 by Sheilagh Lee on June 2, 2011 - 2:00 pm

    Truly lovely.

    thank you!


  5. #5 by Swaram on June 2, 2011 - 2:18 pm

    Loved loved loved this one T 🙂

    Esp. ‘The eternal love that made him Him was Her.’ Simply beautiful!

    thank you, swar 🙂


  6. #6 by Pepper on June 2, 2011 - 4:29 pm

    Oh wowwww! The presentation is just brilliant! So are the words, but the presentation has me amazed!

    thank you Pepper!


  7. #7 by Little Fingers on June 2, 2011 - 6:24 pm

    You are super creative! The words you are always good, the presentation was too good..

    thank you!


  8. #8 by Psych Babbler on June 3, 2011 - 12:21 am

    Beautiful! I loved the words and the layout/style. I was inspired by something I’d seen on your blog ages ago I think (can’t remember what) but you set your poems in a certain way and I wrote for my OSI prompt for this week with small diamonds. (Sorry don’t know the technical term!)

    you did? how did i miss that one? let me go read it now



  9. #9 by Deboshree on June 3, 2011 - 12:26 am

    Lovely is the word. I loved this extremely poetic poem. 😀

    thank you!


  10. #10 by Bindhu!!! on June 3, 2011 - 1:53 am

    Absolutely brilliant!!!

    thank you!


  11. #11 by Bikram on June 3, 2011 - 4:51 am

    Now what do i say to this .. How do you do it .. I need coaching classes ..
    and the the last 3 words him was her.. TRUE LOVE 🙂

    🙂 thanks


  12. #12 by Ashwathy on June 3, 2011 - 6:56 am

    I love it! 🙂 In fact the presentation gives a feel like he is a diamond star shining just for her 🙂

    thank you!


  13. #13 by Achu on June 5, 2011 - 9:39 am

    awesome!! the writing and the look of it..



  14. #14 by mindlovemisery on June 6, 2011 - 2:45 am

    Beautiful style and it I feel it totally enhances the powerful sentiment as Ashwathy said the diamond shape gives the impression of luminescence and strength

    thank you!


  15. #15 by Priya on June 6, 2011 - 7:31 am

    WOW! Loved it T 🙂



  16. #16 by Matt on August 21, 2012 - 2:34 pm

    Good. Now that you have mastered all the poetic forms , what next? 😀

    err, mastered? really? i don’t think so. need a lot of practice to get to that point 🙂


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