One Single Impression – Prompt 170: Manifest

I endure the hardest of pains

with hopes to see you again, to face life hand in hand.

Hanging on to the happy past, its remains,

I endure the hardest of pains.

Will I ever be free of these chains?

Will your love manifest itself before no more I can withstand?

I endure the hardest of pains

with hopes to see you again, to face life hand in hand.

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This is my entry for One Single Impression – Prompt 170: Manifest

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  1. #1 by Psych Babbler on June 3, 2011 - 12:14 am

    I like! How come you didn’t submit your entry on the OSI page? Or am I just blind?

    I forgot 😀 i submitted it after reading your comment…thanks!

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    • #2 by Psych Babbler on June 4, 2011 - 12:31 am

      Yay! First to comment on one of your posts after such a long time!! 😀

      yay! 😀

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  2. #3 by Deboshree on June 3, 2011 - 12:27 am

    When the love and longing are as intense as that, manifestation cannot long be elusive.
    😀

    🙂

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    • #4 by Matt on August 21, 2012 - 2:35 pm

      One can only hope.

      🙂

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  3. #5 by chroniclesofdee on June 3, 2011 - 12:54 am

    Love the colors on the blog!

    Yellow is such a happy color 🙂

    thanks!

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  4. #6 by Bindhu!! on June 3, 2011 - 2:01 am

    I just feel manifest is out of place here… May be because I am not so much a believer that love brings pain.

    hmmm

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  5. #7 by Henry Clemmons on June 3, 2011 - 8:23 pm

    Intense. I know the feeling. Great write.

    http://henryclemmonspoet.blogspot.com/2011/05/palpable-park-single-impression-170.html

    thank you!

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