One Single Impression: Prompt 172 – Miss (Long for)

Miss You

Memories of you invade my night.
I smile and sob as I reminisce the past.
Stars across the sky I use to write,
Stories of us, so forever they last.

You and I, the tale starts.
Of our love, grief and joy there are parts.
Undo I wish to do of your death to give hope to lovers’ hearts.

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This is my entry for One Single Impression: Prompt 172 – Miss.

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  1. #1 by Anonymous on June 15, 2011 - 11:11 pm

    Awesome! Brilliant use of punctuations. I am not sure about immortality in human form but your poems prove that it can certainly be achieved through words. great poems! keep it up.

    You made my day! Thank you for the kind words…

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  2. #2 by Deboshree on June 15, 2011 - 11:31 pm

    Another beautiful acrostic! The longing is very well expressed.

    thanks!

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  3. #3 by Priya on June 16, 2011 - 2:49 am

    Nicely expressed T!!

    thank you!

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  4. #4 by Achu on June 16, 2011 - 10:48 am

    Every single post, beautifully written.. But why are all of them sad? 😦

    thank you!

    I don’t know…I find it easy to write sad stuff 😛

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  5. #5 by Swaram on June 16, 2011 - 2:11 pm

    🙄
    U write so well!

    thank you!

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  6. #6 by Comfy on June 16, 2011 - 2:22 pm

    Amazing words T. And the last line so touches the heart.

    thank you!

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  7. #7 by celestialrays on June 16, 2011 - 2:44 pm

    I loved the stars bit a lot 🙂

    me too 😀

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  8. #8 by Psych Babbler on June 19, 2011 - 2:55 am

    I loved ths one! Evokes so many emotions…great acrostic T! 🙂

    thanks!

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  9. #9 by Andy on June 19, 2011 - 9:41 am

    Simply beautiful…something about melancholy strikes a chord with me.

    This was mine:
    http://mypoetcharm.blogspot.com/2011/04/fire-of-thirst.html

    thanks!

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  10. #10 by Reema on July 4, 2011 - 1:05 pm

    touching lines!

    thanks!

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  11. #11 by Matt on August 21, 2012 - 3:13 pm

    You need to write more happy stuff 😀 😀

    😀 ok..noted 😀

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